

Five minute quick sketches and a one-and-a-half hour pose. Aaron Westerberg gave me excellent critiques on my head drawing tonight as well as on the one I drew of Daniella a few days back. I'll document some of the pointers he gave so I can keep them in mind for later:
1. Once you finish the initial light/dark separation, begin to organize your halftones cleanly, moving from the shadow areas into the light (remember the procedures you learned from Rick's head drawing class).
2. Vary the lines you do decide to keep in the drawing, but opt to obliterate line as much as possible and let tone/mass do the heavy lifting for you. Lose those edges. Recall what Meadow said about lines being pocket change - imagine you've only got enough to afford a few of them, so make them count.
3. Adding a thin, light sliver of a line next to a highlight can make it pop like nobody's business. It's all about contrast.
4. Watch the placement of and clearly define the boundaries of your shapes. Mask the drawing in parts to determine which harmonize and which need to be finessed further.
5. Measure twice, draw once. Watch the length of that neck on Michael.
I'm really grateful to have talented teachers who can give such honest and thorough critiques.